MMC# 3/11/16 ~ I'm Back!!

Hello everyone!! I am back with a short story for the Monday Minute Challenge! Can I just say that I am so happy to be back? Because I really am!! :) I missed you all so much! Now, lets get going with this post.  I used the photo, and sentence prompt, and the story is 221 words. I had so much fun writing this story and I hope you all enjoy reading it! :) Have a lovely day!

"Get up you yellow-belly freak!" she cried. Her talons glistened with blood, and her eyes were filled with hatred.

I struggled to get up, the pain in my side hurt deeply. I could feel heat rushing through my blood. A feeling I only got when I was angered. It started out as a little spark, and then it grew. I held the fireball in my hand, sweat trickling down my face from the heat. She cackled viciously.


"Do you think," she cried through breaths of evil laughter, "that you can stop me?"


The anger built up inside me even more. The fire that I held in my hand grew larger than it ever had before.


"Come on Jack." she said, her teeth glistening yellow, "Come Jack.....Jack...Jack..."


Her voice was drowning out and her body was becoming a blur.


"Jack!" I heard a familiar voice call. "Jack!"


I woke up with a start. Sweat trickled down my face.


"Jack, are you ok?" my 11 year old sister asked looking at me with panic.


"I...I.." I said through gulps of air. " I had the dream again."


Suddenly, I remembered the pain in my side. I looked down to find dark red blood flowing from my body.

"Maybe," my sister said, her hands trembling, "It...it isn't a dream."

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  1. So happy your back, Shelby!
    (by the way, do you have a goodreads or NanoWrimo profile?)
    -Mic

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    1. Thanks Mic! I'm happy to be back too! How have you been?
      Sadly, I don't have any of those accounts. :(

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  2. So excited your back!!
    ~Katie

    http://concealedfoundation.com/

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    1. Thank you so much Katie! I'm really excited to be back too! :)

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  3. Yay! Shelby is back! *Confetti canons burst confetti everywhere*
    I'm glad you're back! Your story is amazing! I love the end...

    With love,
    Pea

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    1. YAY!! *Gets some confetti in hair* Thank you so much Pea! :) I'm so glad you liked it!!

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    2. WOO HOO! ;) You're welcome, it was great!
      With love,
      Pea

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  4. THE ENDING OH MY GOSH THAT WAS EPIC. Excellent writing, dear!

    Ellie | The Dolls of 221B

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  5. Yay! I'm so excited to see that you're back- I hope you had a nice little vacation :). Wonderful story!

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    1. Thank you Vivian! I did. :) It was really nice to get a break from blogging and just spend time with my friends and family.
      Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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  6. Love the story, Shelby! Glad your back :)

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    1. Thank you Simi! :) I'm glad to be back too.

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  7. That was a great story!!
    ~ Elsa

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    1. Thank you so much Elsa! I'm glad you stopped by. :)

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  8. I'm glad your back! I like to write too!

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    1. Thank you Kiley! That's really cool! You should post one of your stories on your blog! I would love to read it. :)

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  9. Hey, Shelby!! : )
    I'm so glad to see you're back! XD
    PS I left you a comment on "A Little Break". :)
    Love the story -- did I miss the first part, or are you writing in the start-in-the-middle style? : ) Can't wait to see what happens! :)Love ya!! : )

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    1. Hey Azalea!
      I seen that! Thank you soo much!! You are such an amazing friend and are so encouraging!!
      Yeah, I am writing in the start-in-the-middle style. :) Love ya too!!

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    2. Awww, no problem! You deserve it!! :)
      PS When do you think you'll be free to call? :)

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    3. PSS
      Nice "Every Bit of Lovely"!! I LOVE Jamie Grace. I didn't know that she sung this style! lol XD Such a happy song! :D

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  10. So happy you're back! And I love the story! ;)

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    1. Thank you so much!! So glad you liked it! :)

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  11. Glad to see you posting again! Your story is amazing, how I wish I could write like that!

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    1. Thank you Maddy! I really missed this blog. Aww, thank you! That means a lot!

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