MMC 7/27/15

Hello everyone! Once again I will be praticipating in the Monday Minute Challenge! Hope you all enjoy! :)

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She looked at the old chest in amazement. How long had this been up here? She thought to herself running her hand over the old leather. She rubbed her index finger and thumb together slowly, feeling the little bits of dust covering them.
Should I open it? She thought to herself. What if grandpa caught me up here? She pushed that thought aside and carefully lifted the trunk. She gasped with wonderment. In the chest were old pictures of precious little babies! Who were these babies and why were their pictures in the trunk? She gently picked up one of the pictures and ran her finger across the delicate face. It was a beautiful baby! In fact, one of the most beautiful babies she had ever seen! She put it down and picked up the little material of lace that lay across in the chest with all the pictures. It felt so frail and light in her hands. She smiled at it, and then her glance was caught by another picture. She picked it up and stared hard at it. The picture she held in her hand was not a baby, but a girl. A beautiful girl with brunette hair and a beautiful smile. She flipped the picture over and on the back was written in dark ink, Evangeline Clair Thomas. She dropped it! Could it be? Could it really be her mother! She stood up and walked back a few steps in shock. When all of a sudden she seen a tall object standing at the doorway of the attic from the corner of her eye. She turned around to get a better look and immediately wished she hadn’t.
 
280 words. I used the picture prompt and the sentence prompt.
 

Comments

  1. This is great! You have a real talent :)
    What did she see??

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    1. Thank you so much Simi! You have no idea how much that means to me!!!
      It was her grandpa. :)

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    2. Phew! At least it wasn't a monster! :D
      That's ok, I'm glad it means a lot :)

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  2. Gasp! Are you going to write more??

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    1. I was actually thinking about writing more! We will have to see. :) Thanks for stopping by and leaving a comment!!

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  3. Wow! This is really interesting! I would definitely want to read more!
    Abigail Grace

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    1. Thank you so much Abigail! It means a lot! :)

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  4. This is really good, Shelby! You are an awesome writer!!!:)
    ~Sarah

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    1. Aww, thank you so much Ellie!!

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    2. Oops! I am so sorry! I meant Sarah!

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  5. This is really good! You are an amazing writer :D

    ~Noor

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    1. Aww, thank you so much Noor!! :)

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  6. Wow! You're an amazing writer!!

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    1. Aww, thank you so much Maddy! It means a lot. :)

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  7. Hi! You're one of the lucky people that I have tagged for the Solve-This-Riddle Tag! Here is the link: http://lordsgirls.blogspot.com/2015/08/solve-this-riddle-tag-from-sophia.html
    Have fun!

    -Trinity from lordsgirls.blogspot.com

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    1. Thanks Trinity!! I will go check it out. :)

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  8. Wow, this was an intriguing story. I hope you choose to continue it.
    Also, I wanted to say your blog design is awesome :)
    ~Alisa

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    1. Thank you so much Alisa!! You comment made my day! :)

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  9. Hello magnificent Shelby. I wanted to take a moment to express to you how thankful I am that you've taken the time to not only read my content, but follow my blog. Your support means the world to me. <3

    Keep shining your light.

    xx Rosie

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    1. Awww, thank you so much for your encourging comment Rosie! You made my whole day ten times better! Thank you so much again. Your very welcome! Your blog is awesome and your posts are amazing. :)

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